Talofa there Bloggers!,
In room 9 we have been writing about descriptive writing. We had two pictures to choose by. One picture was a beautiful tree house and the other picture was about a alien space ship. I wrote about the tree house!
Here is a picture of my Descriptive Writing!
Hope I have comments!
BYE!
Hello Jailah,
ReplyDeleteI really love your writing about the tree house. I think you have amazing descriptive words. I love how you started off with one scary dark night. What is your favourite part in the story? -Angel
Hello Jailah,
ReplyDeleteI like your descriptive writing I like the way you said "One dark scary night" are you trying to make a horry story or did you just write that to make it sound spooky?
Malo Jailah,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this awesome descriptive writing with us! Although I am very happy because you havent posted in ages! I liked how you used some decribing words and some similes! I have a question to ask you. What was your favourite describing word in your story? Anyways go to go now bye!
Hell Jailah. You writing is so creative and it has lots of describing words. My favourite part was the start. I love how you started it with one scary dark night. Bye have a great day enjoy.
ReplyDeleteHi Jailah. Your writing is creative and it has lots of describing words. My favourite word is is the second one. I love how you stared with one dark night.
ReplyDeleteI hope you have a great holiday!