Thursday, August 22, 2019
Music story starter.
Hi this is a story I wrote after I watched the music video that was called language .I chose this video because sounds nice and I like the beat. I hope you enjoy my story.
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Good Morning Jailah i was just commenting on this blog to say you have done a excellent job. I love that you used so many describing words in your writing.Hope you have the best day ever and stay warm bye.
ReplyDeleteHey Jailah,
ReplyDeleteI like how you said the wolves are angry because it is funny.that remind me of when I go hunting. next time you can maybe have no full stop in the title. how long did it take to make it.
Good Morning Jailah i was just commenting on this blog to say you have done excellent job.I love that you used so many describing words in yuor writing.Hope you have a nice day.How many brother and sister to you have see you on monday.
DeleteHey Jailah,
ReplyDeleteIt's me your bff Krystallynna. I just read the story you have been writing about. The photo is so beautiful! And I really love that how you said when the wolves were getting closer to me I jumped in the ocean. It was deep. That reminds me of the deep ocean cause I went to the beach long time ago. I just have a question how long did this story take you?
Hey it me Jailah here your friend thank u for the feedback and I hope u had a good day.When I was working on it it took 1 to 2 minutes to do it and I had a lot of fun working on it with the other friend I hope u have fun bye!
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